I tried the typing test tech tip. I always seemed to fumble with typing and using the website was kind of fun and I could possibly use it in the future to get better at typing!
The eight spoke Dharma wheel symbolizes the Noble Eightfold Path, Wikicommons THE CROW THAT THOUGHT IT KNEW: Bodhisatta in this version is a crow and he meets a man Viraka and Savitthaka. Savitthaka does not heed the warnings and dives deep into a pool of water and dies due to his hubris. THE JUDAS TREE: The king of Benares, Brahmadatta, had four sons. They were taken to see a Judas tree. They all had different descriptions of the tree. They failed to ask the charioteer who took them to see the tree, as he had see the tree year round. The moral of the story is that everyone has knowledge to share. THE RIVER FISH AND THE MONEY: Brahmadatta again is in this story as the king of Benares. There was a young brother who was thievish. They paid the river spirit and he grew. Eventually the river spirit was tricked by the thievish brother and had a fish swallow a thousand rupees. The fish was then sold to the owner of the thousand rupees but was charged the price minus the thousand he ...
The feedback I have received back has been tremendously helpful. The most useful type of comment that I have received are the ones that are harsh. It is easy not to step on someone's toes, but I feel it is necessary to point out any mistake or shortcoming as long as it comes from a good place. Up until this point all the comments have been purely constructive, the comments urge me to challenge myself and do better. I have found that generally my comments pertain more to the premise of the story and focus less on grammar. None the less I am happy with my comments as I feel that they could potentially help guide the writer for future writings. Reading other peoples' stories has also sparked quite a few ideas for me to work with, and has inspired some of the writings already posted! I feel that blog comments really give the sense of interaction that you would get from a real class setting, in fact it might be better since the blog comments can be posted at any time. I feel...
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